Hmm, quite interesting.
This is an interesting song you got here. The synths I don't like very much because you used sytrus. That's very easily noticable. I don't really hear a bass, if there is one, it's too soft. You got some nice melodies, and unique. A little annoying, but not much.
Overall, good job. Keep at it, you'll get better ;D
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=2020198